Push [Past] the Edge

by Steady Stereotype   Sep 14, 2009


Punch the shattered mirror,
Watch glistening petals fall,
Punch the shattered mirror,
Watch the blood erupt from call.

Kick the spiked wall,
Feel feet bare pain unreal
Kick the spiked wall,
So tell me, how do you feel?

Grasp the thorny rose,
Burnt crimson trickle through poisoned vines,
Grasp the thorny rose,
I dare you to read scripted lines.

Do you feel better now?
Distracted from the pain,
Do you feel better now?
They all think you're insane.

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  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Hmmm. Very dark and emotional write. I would agree with Luna Blue though; it sounds more that of hate than sadness. But poetry is expression, and you did a good job with that. Also, the flow could not be touchd. So I say that this deserves a 5/5.

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This was ok but i didn't feel the emotion. It was indeed a sad write. Well done 4/5, kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by katie

    Very good flow and well written. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    I like the flow throughout the poem, i think it was very well written. I especially like the ending, it put alittle bit of humor in a sad poem. Well done

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