I Miss You: It's Fate

by Mezmeryz   Jul 1, 2009


I feel like I could write forever,
When it comes to writing to you.
But there are only so many things I could say,
Though every word I write is true.

Like how much you mean to me,
How I wish you are always alright,
How much I miss you everyday,
How I never wanted you out of my sight.

You had to go. You'll be back soon.
I tell myself this all the time.
But I can't yet believe that you're gone.
So I make believe that I'm fine.

I dropped you to the airport;
I thought that would help it sink in.
I watched you go and I turned around,
I knew now the pain would begin.

The best and worst moments of my life,
Were the last few, which I spent with you.
An incomplete hug, because I couldn't hold on,
You were going; there was nothing I could do.

I wish you always have that smile on your face,
Because it can lighten up anyone's day,
Though I don't get to see it, I've got the key-ring,
And in my heart, you reside to stay.

When you went, you took a part of me with you,
And I hope you will keep it from harm's way.
I hope you'll bring it back, safe and sound,
I'll pray for your happiness every day.

See, life is a pain in the backside,
But there's no need for any hate:
I got four months with my best friend...
The best four written in my fate.

For funny girl.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Anthony

    Amazing!!!! 10/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lulu

    This is a really nice poem i really like it alot
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    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I'm at this stage right now in my life; missing someone so I thought Id read this and hope I could relate. Eye-catching title, I liked it.

    This poem was full of emotion, I could feel like your heart was put onto the page.. it was that good. What a geat write; missing someone can cause pain but truly it can be a good feeling if you look deeper. Just think of what that person would think if they knew you thought of them that much; they knew you cared as much as you do, ect. A beautiful write this was; something I can somewhat relate to myself.

    You did an excellent job!
    5/5.

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The admiration for this friend is sweet and the way you express your admiration makes me really admire this friendship. I really enjoyed reading this
    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 14 years ago

    by IMMORTAL PAIN

    WOW. JUST AMAZING. I MADE ME SHED A TEAR LOL. :') VERY BEAUTIFUL U HAVE A LOT OF TALENT