by Angel Tears Aug 3, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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Forget me, for I am not good for you |
by Midnight Sky
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Awesome here lovely poem i see here that you are very talented |
by LittleMsPink
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Love it <3 |
by Kaila
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I like how this poem sort of was like the "He loves me.. He loves me not" game. I thought it flowed very nicely together and overall I was impressed:) |
by Ali
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Wow, really excellent:) loved it |
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I really thought this was creative, something new, the repetition of "forget me, forget me not", it added a nice touch to this piece, and strengthed the message. What I got out of this piece is you expressing yourself, wanting that person but saying that they would be better without you, admitting your flaws and letting it all out. You are going back and forth and are unsure, at least that is what I got from this piece. You expressed yourself very well, and got the reader to relate and understand what you were going through. Hope all goes well, take care. |