Rose Bouquet (7/5 Trochee)

by Sylvia   Aug 29, 2009


(The 7/5 Trochee with Rhyme Scheme a/b/c/b plus Internal Rhyme Lines 1 and 3)

Roses bloom, perfect perfume,
sweet scent in the air.
Vibrant hues,covered with dew,
nothing can compare.

A bouquet, stunning display,
babies breath, their bed.
Regal flowers, with powers,
from the color of red.

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The 7/5 Trochee, created by Andrea Dietrich, of 2 or more quatrain stanzas with the following
set rules:

Meter: 7/5/7/5
Rhyme Scheme: a/b/c/b or a/b/a/b

The meter is trochee, which means alternating stressed and unstressed beats in each line, with each line beginning and ending in a stressed syllable. This is a simple lyrical type little poem, so rhymes will be basic, nothing fancy. The poem itself should give a description of something of interest to the poet. There is not a set number of these quatrain type stanzas, but a typical 7/5 Trochee would consist of two quatrains, with the second stanza serving to tie up the idea presented in the first stanza.

One variation of this form is to employ internal rhyme in lines 1 and 3 so that the middle of each of those lines matches the rhyme at the end of each one, respectively, as illustrated by this final example poem.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like roses and you have painted a lovely
    picture. Well done with the form, it sounds
    hard to do it but after reading it I have the
    motivation to try it..thanks & good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    'babies breath, their bed.'
    `This was a very very unique line, and a great metaphor. Absolutely loved it! You did amazing!

    A very beautiful write Sylvia. All I see in my mind are roses :) Great work!

  • 14 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Sorry, i meant rosy.

  • 14 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Beautiful poem. very rose :) 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Like the looks and the flow of this form. Really beautifully done.