You (Parallelogram de Crystalline)

by Sylvia   Sep 6, 2009


Bright sunshine,
radiates from a smile,
illuminating dark days with light.

Tenderness,
delicate caresses,
butterflies jealously imitate.

Gentleness,
touches of pure softness,
because of you roses bloom, birds sing.

Resplendent,
shining so brilliantly,
sun, moon, stars pale in comparison.

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Parallelogram de Crystalline is a poetry form created by Karan Naidu. This form consists of 4 verses of 3 lines each. The syllable count for each stanza is 3, 6, 9. In this style of poem, the beauty of a lover is compared with the nature and described...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    This is just so beautiful :)

    Gentleness,
    touches of pure softness,
    because of you roses bloom, birds sing.

    It is such a wonderful feeling when you get these feelings inside from the love of another . Just thoughts of that person make everything seem so much more alive and vibrant.

    Resplendent,
    shining so brilliantly,
    sun, moon, stars pale in comparison.

    I have felt this kind of love before. Nothing can compare to the light a love like this brings to our lives.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Each verse is beautifully crafted with a
    mixture of love and nature. I liked it from
    start to finish..good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Karan truly invented a beautiful format and you did it justice with these words you used. Very beautiful and tender wording, Silvia:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Truly a beautiful write that incorporates a bit of nature when describing love. The two mix well together.. short but very sweet and full of love. Great work.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You did a great job on this form. It's not as easy as people might think. But absolutely beautiful mixing nature and love.

    Very tender and emotional. This should be a weekly winner. Awesome
    Jimmy

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