A Broken Heart Left To Die

by Danielle   Jun 15, 2004


I'm losing control.
Lost in the dark.
My world is spinning.
Confused.
Hurt.
Dazed.
Weak.
Longing to touch the impossible.
I'm looking up at you.
I'm screaming inside.
Looking for the words I've been wanting to say.
Ur not listening.
No one is.
Tears are falling down your beautiful face.
Why do you cry?
I don't understand.
Your words are faint.
I can barely hear.
You look angry.
Please don't be angry.
Your crying more.
Please stop.
Stop this pain, this chaos, this fear. Who caused you so much hurt?
Who is making you cry.
You lean into kiss me.
I can barely hear your words.
What?

"I love you babygirl. I'm sorry I hurt you...I'll miss you..."

Your turnin away. Why? Come back! Please! I'll forgive you. Lord knows I always have!
Where are you going?
What are you doing?
Please don't turn your back.
I don't understand.
I'm not gone.
I'm right here.

Baby I love you so much.
Please don't leave me in the dark. Please don't leave me to cry alone again.
Please stay with me.
I need you.
I want you.
I love you.
I lay back down...
Defeated.

Who knew a broken heart could kill?

I have never really written anything like this before. So be honest. Thank You.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure


    Wow. Such Emotion.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    that was a great poem! lol thanks for comenting on so many of mine, keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by hayley williams

    HEY DANI, YOU TRIED OUT A DIFFERENT STYLE AND YOU TOTALLY MADE IT WORK! I DONT ACTUALLY BELIEVE YOU COULD WRITE A BAD POEM EVEN IF YOU TRIED, YOU ARE SO GREAT THAT IM JEALOUS LOL HAYEZ XX

  • 19 years ago

    by Escobar

    hey great...no awesome work i like every single poem of your poems there are all great. and if this is your first poem you wrote in this style keep it up it's great..

  • 19 years ago

    by TaTy

    Danielle,

    As usual another great poem, keep them coming girl! another 5 in my book! I think I have commented before on your poems, but if I haven't I want you to know that they are all great, and thank you for commenting on one of my poems.

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