In Confrontation

by Sourav   Oct 14, 2009


Mountains - too high to climb
Tears make a deep river
Your selfish emotions block the way
Dark circle of nasty thoughts;
Hounded by your hatred
Abused like heinous sin
Sibilates as God's mistake
You- make me feel like a vice;

But with your all these assertions
When you kill my soul
I rise like an impossible dream
Like your worst nightmare;
I enlighten my virtue
To liberate my mind from your betrayal
Now you are the victim of your own mistakes
And defeat stares straight at our face.

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  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    ^^what i meant was emotions, my bad.

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    This is the kind of poem i always adore, where words and emotions make the backbone, not the rhyme scheme or any form. The kind of emotional portrayed behind this piece was very provoking and that is the most important thing.

    Well done..

  • 14 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    A+

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sourav
    Very deep intense piece you have penned. Thought provoking. I love the way you ended this poem.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I admire the voice of confidence in this write
    the one who stands tall & strong rather then
    retreating into a sad world..well penned!

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