I'm sorry to say that today I learned what it was
to be in pain, but to be so secretive
I rekindled my passion if not more than before
I didn't know that I had opened a closed door
I was pulled in by the sensual lore
I wished to it all, but not anymore
I cried now twice because of what you've done
but a secret shouldn't always be kept, but you pulled a fast one
Tomorrow I tell your husband for what we've been up to
I can't believe the amount of sins that I'm about to accrue
Why would you ever want to hurt me being this way?
twice if asked you to marry me, twice turned to Grey
I hope that you and your husband can find love and be done
but I cannot be mad at you, you've given me my pride and joy, my son.
The poem itself is well written, the rhyming scheme was spot on and the flow worked perfectly.
As for the content....it was so sad and beautiful, your words are strong and pulled me in the more i read on.
This was a very deep and emotional write, you did a wonderful job :)
Wow, that is incredibly deep. At first I thought the repetition of certain words was having a negative effect on the poem. However, after I read it a second time, they seemed to add sincerity to the writing. Almost as if to show the human side of the author, to make it less exact; more relatable. Well written 5/5 for sure.