Frozen Moment

by Sourav   Nov 2, 2009


No matter where you are- how far you've gone
In the same way, you'll find a mournful dawn
A dying candle with its last desperate light
Can not hold long, light up your hopeless night

Meaning of some things- you'll never get
Orphan life- lingers like unloved guest
And you wander like a hopeless thought
Forgotten by those, who need you not

You escape- in frozen silence, you breathe
But memory from the past creeps in beneath
No matter what you do- how much you try
Suddenly a bitter feeling will make you cry.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    " Suddenly a bitter feeling will make you cry "

    great line .... only few can understand the real meaning of this poem....

    superb.....

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    This was a beautiful, lovely yet filled with profound sadness and at the same time revealed such anguish.another excellent piece form you..

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Three simple and yet so deep stanzas. Awesome write friend, loved everything about it. So easy to drown in your words.

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I can't seem to pick a favourite verse or line
    because from start to finish each line is
    crafted so beautifully with heartfelt words..
    liked the read :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sourav,

    This is listed under life...but it is so sad...

    I loved the wording, so poetic and somehow so resigned.

    No matter what you do- how much you try
    Suddenly a bitter feeling will make you cry.

    ^^

    I know exactly what you mean by this, I too am hounted by horrors of my past.

    A much beautiful poem, you should be proud of:)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

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