The Mist Beyond the Falls

by Karl Wild GG23   Nov 5, 2009


Winter fades and spring sets in,
The smell of the air is intoxicating,
While love an passion are growing thin,
A pain settles in my heart, I'm waiting.

Yet love still flows like freshly melted creeks,
The sound almost as angelic as your voice,
I rub my hand across your cherry cheeks,
Wanting to stay, afraid its not my choice.

A noble mist beyond the mystic falls,
Portrays an astounding sight for the eyes,
Grief of words past written on invisible walls,
In search of a pure truth beyond the lies.

Forget it were my slips that made us tumble,
I can't walk without your hand holding mine,
All loves will trip, yes all will surely stumble,
Though ours with time gets sweeter like wine.

A beautiful face appears in the dark calm of night,
Warm breezes caress me like your gentle breath,
I can see through the mist, so close yet not quite,
Life without you the one thing worse than death.

Freely as rivers flow thoughts of you they roam,
I promise I'll always be there to answer your calls,
Keep porch lights on In case you decide to come home,
Waiting forever alone, in the mist beyond the falls.

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  • 14 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Yet love still flows like freshly melted creeks,
    The sound almost as angelic as your voice,
    I rub my hand across your cherry cheeks,
    Wanting to stay, afraid its not my choice.

    That was the stanza I enjoyed the most... Love your style of writing, the rhyme was awesome... Very very well worded poems right here...

    A beautiful face appears in the dark calm of night,
    Warm breezes caress me like your gentle breath,
    I can see through the mist, so close yet not quite,
    Life without you the one thing worse than death.

    Later this stanza captured my attention... I just can relate to it... Love the vivid imagery of this poem...

    Among your five latest poems, this title captured my attention the most!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I agree with Cris the flow of tis was flawless abd really makes this easy to read. I'm gonna have to start calling you the master of love lol. I never read any love poems as in depth as yours. You are really good at expressing your feelings in a new and refreshing way. I love the title. I love the imagery. I loved everything about this piece. I sense another winner with this one hun, Kepp blowing me away with these amazing poems. :) Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    The flow was perfect and the Imagery made me feel like i was there. The last stanza was like perfect, it tied everything up in a nice little bow.
    very nice 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Great abab rhyme and flow the imagery and emotion is delivered so well in this romantic poem

  • 14 years ago

    by jojo

    Wow. truly amazing. bravo!! i especially love the last stanza how you tied everything back to the mist beyond the falls. i especially like ur description with "cherry cheeks" instead of the usual cliche "rosey red cheeks" or something like that. very nice 5/5!

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