Path

by Kuro   Nov 22, 2009


Pitiful, an utter disgrace
Roots of character I can trace
Back to when it all first started
Exploring new places uncharted

Mistakes are common; for me they are an art
With each new struggle I'm a little more smart
Yet I find myself precariously devout
Repeat offender without a new route

Doomed to walk the forsaken road
Time to reap what I have sewed
Pitifully I hesitate to repeat
Each nailed driven into my feet

I tire from my short but painful jaunt
The path I chose I can never vaunt
My life continues my voice hoarse
The path I walk is my only coarse

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  • 13 years ago

    by victoria

    Beautiful poem about life. How each day is a struggle but a learning experience. love your words choices.=]

    victoria

  • 14 years ago

    by Skyfire

    The second stanza was my favorite...I think you did really well with the rhyming and still keeping with the feeling of what you wanted to say.

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Wow. I feel like this a lot. Its so relatable. Great poem about life.

    i tire from my short but painful jaunt
    the path i chose i can never vaunt
    my life continues my voice hoarse
    the path i walk is my only coarse

    I really loved your word choice here and i feel exactly like this. The way im going on is the only path i can choose. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Martha

    What a beautiful poem about life.. It really says what is happening everyday and what results our actions and words :)) nice poem... great job!

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