Evanescent Mistress [Collab]

by The Queen   Dec 25, 2009


A snake-bitten voile swirls
in murmuring winds, passing on
scandalous stories--a woeful
treatment of golden charms.
Sorrowful eyes, scarcely diabolic,
now bereave one's sign of life.

Nut trees' silhouettes deform
shapes of recognition, arbitrary
diminishing--analogous innocence.
Like shadow-plays instil illusion;
her dark reign entrenches distress.
(Eternal abasement presides power.)

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Effulgent in peerless beauty,
yet hated by mortal men.
(Once prey of the recidivist--
most treacherous of divines.)
Vestal chastity; amorally tainted
now sullied, a disgrace.

A sanctified misogynistic; belligerent
infernal stare presages--barren breaths
while, poisonous hate--shrouds dismal torment.
Awaken seclusion, a monstrous perennially
and nevermore, was the truth revealed.
(Weep not at a virgin's wake!)

Wailing tones echo--vindictively,
amassing hierarchic influence.
Reflections serve as comeuppance
when versatile opulence crumbles--
vilify not the perpetuation!
(Silently engraving headstones.)

Revered lips, now a sacrosanct
nestling upon mortal death.
"Fabled enchantress visage"
eidetic-- upon women's umbrages.
A material effigy, of regal artistry
wreathed in noble simplicity.

Mournful cries for resurrection
enslave statues to venomous liquid--
dripping into an abyss of dimness:
unguarding temper; shaping scars.
Somber tokens of the disastrous past
adrift between divergent minds.

`` A collab with Luna Blue :-) If you leave any comments here, please comment on hers as well.``

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1139257

***The last stanza was written in an acrostic form.***

Copyright (C) 2009 by EvanescentMoon

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  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    At times the vocabulary was complex which can in turn disrupt one's ability to comprehend what youre saying but for the most part I thought you both wrote this very well. I peronsally would tone down the vocabulary a little because even some words I wasn't sure of the meaning. Anyways, nicely done.