My Immortal [Quatern]

by The Queen   Jan 2, 2010


Each mirth and grief of drifting clouds
frigid days and lightless nights shrouds
musky rain's trail out my window
Beloved, remind me of you

Marchen zephyr wending around
each mirth and grief of drifting clouds
enticed by your enthralling charm
-tousled hair and eyes so profound

Icy morning, dreary and bland
surrounds forested gothic land
each mirth and grief of drifting clouds
depicts tales of my immortal

A place my consort oft concealed
shadowy world alas revealed
yet the one place he never hides
each mirth and grief of drifting clouds
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Quatern
A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It is similar to the Kyrielle
and the Retourne. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of
stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fourth line of stanza
four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme
scheme.

Copyright (C) 2010 by EvanescentMoon

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    *claps* I loved this. I'm not sure if you know the song "My Immortal" By Evanscence but this piece has the same powerful words and sadness as that song. This was very well done hun and I loved loved readning it. You always amaze me :) *hugs* Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wonderful job done on the quatern
    very powerful and deep write... beautifully worded...

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    Great job on the form Myryn. It is so wonderful to see you guys branching out and trying new things.

    A place my consort oft concealed
    shadowy world alas revealed
    yet the one place he never hides
    each mirth and grief of drifting clouds
    ^^^
    Love the line you used for a refrain!
    And loved this last stanza, especially "shadowy world alas revealed"

    Great job hun !!!!!