You Are My Smile.

by Courageous Dreamer   Apr 16, 2010


Your sentimental amity-
like the velvet spring breeze
caresses the abyss of my heart;
abolishing artifacts of misery-
titillating each emotion I withhold-
sculpting a luminous expression-
from your warm admiration.

I taste each word of your consolation-
scrutinizing every moment;
absorbing all its beauty-
As I cascade; voluntarily --
into your arms.

Happiness quells fragmented words-
waiving me speechless-
infusing the air-
revealing my contentment.

This smile alludes to your name;
can you hear its faint echo?
see its glisten in the distance?
inhale its essence?
savor its beauty?
feel its delicacy?

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  • 13 years ago

    by Kuro

    Wow. your use of vocabulary was amazing. the words seemed so refined. eloquent even. you have quote the way with words.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Temps
    Great job on your poetry tag challenge :) You seem to have gotten everything Joe asked for :) Great imagery and word choices.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was beautiful Temps, it started out so intense to me, there was a mouthful of description and it only got better. I loved how you added the questions on the end that made the reader smile, well done. You put this together well and I felt such a sense of happiness.

    Keep on writing girl!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A nice poem to write about your friendship with someone. Good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    Temps you never and I do repeat never stop amazing me with your poetry. You can make something so simple and paint a beautiful picture and with such good description and depth. Good write and keep writing.

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