You; an idiotic Fairytale

Yeah, I can totally relate; I totally live in my dreams. lol

An amazing write Nema. was totally blown away by the beauty of words and the imagery...

like the sun and the moon-
a faded color shone
in a sleepless city
of love
and lust.
^^Brilliantly written... wonderful imgery here...

"Maybe I love you
But not today"
^^that was touching ... and well expressed...

amazing write :)

Nee,

In the last poem of yours I said I just felt like you couldn't get out what you wanted to say, but here, I felt everything you were expressing. Honestly.. this is a favorite piece by you. I just felt something different when reading it.. It is very clever especially with the use of the nonet.. I picked that up while reading because the style was different compared to your usually.. and I loved every second of reading this poem... [which i've now read four times.]

I'm impress with the juxtaposition of the sun and the moon within the first two lines of
the poem. I was just writing Jenn a comment and it seems to be a theme RTVW has been using as of late, just like I did in my latest poem.. I believe we all adore these aspects of nature and I really adored the fact that you used those two colours of gold and silver to represent them. I could see in my mind the changing of the skies.. from golden sun to silver moon. Elegant imagery.

For someone who says that write not of things which effect them in reality.. well you
provoke the most beautiful emotion and create gorgeous scenario's.. Truth to me though is that you hold that emotion within your heart, therefor the poems arn't all of fantasy.. or as you said imagination.. but this being of your imagination was creative. I like seeing what your mind comes up with.

Loved the colour symbolism as I mentioned above. Also with blue breaths..

Awesome write, Nee. Loved it.
-Mel