First kiss

by Fear2love   Apr 22, 2010


Heavy breathing, seductive lips
closed eyes, open minds
confused little souls, understanding more than we should
scared of the outcome, as most would

a first, a last
never ending, nor its never lasts
in mind, but not on lips
feelings will never go away, never will forget that day

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  • 11 years ago

    by Unknown

    I really like the vulnerability that you showcased here. The anticipation of the kiss but yet also the hesitation. The kiss may not have lasted but a few seconds but it will forever live in your mind.

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Oh this is so beautiful, it couldn't be written any better, great poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Love this poem i like the flow of the words :) 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by DiAbolIcaL LiThIuM

    This one tells me that even though you want that kiss your scared to have it, showa a sensative but isecure at the same time
    =) but its great

  • 14 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Wow; amazing i love this :) 5/5

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