Dudette, this is brilliant. It took me some time to focus on it though because I was trying hard on the hidden meanings behind your metaphors.
"he impersonates the sunset upon my lips.
An elixir of evanescent fireflies;
caged by rings of fire."
I would really really like to thank you for such an amazing opening. I was totally drawn in within no less than 10 seconds of time :D love the image!
"He is no more than a Nemeses to my heart,
Evocative enough to illuminate
comets upon my path..."
I think this is my favorite stanza in the whole poem. You misspelled the Goddess's name "Nemesis", I only knew when I had to google the name lol. Very well done on this stanza sweetie, it's simple addictive!
I can truly see you in this poem with-of course- the use of metaphors, but above all, with the use of symbolization in animals.
It could not be more amazing :)