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How romantic and vivd this piece is!
and the title just gave it a vague touch!

5/5 :D

THis is so beautiful the only thing I would change bis to make smile ...smiles

You bring to my heart confidence through fear

and laughter amid my saddest tears

I believe you shine the sunlight along my night

you travel the world through this loving mind

^^
These lines are so unique..somehow I find something inside your words, Nana..the strength to go on is always so clear in your words. How brave you are:)

When you really love a man this si waht it feels like..to find it all in that particular person, you wrote that down so well:)

I am so happy to have you back here, I have not commented this much in ages:)

Love you hun,

5/5 Ingrid

That was a really cute piece :) i read it twice because i enjoyed it so much the first time!

"and through my dreams you have crossed

thousands of miles

through each walkable mile you have

brought me a million smile "
- that was my favourite part of the piece, it was original, and it put a smile on my face! nice work :D

Its been so long with you inside my heart

and through my dreams you have crossed

thousands of miles

I loved these lines...when we love it is as if the person is with you in every moment of your life, very sincere and heartfelt. A wonderful write.