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by ..::Angel of your darkness::.. Jun 18, 2004
Sadness, depression /
Why do you hide your eyes from me?
Covering the tears that I can clearly see,
They fall down your cheek like drops of rain,
They allow me to feel your sadness and pain.
I hold you in my arms your skin so tender,
You feel so cold, please donâ€™t surrender.
We will get through it we always do,
I cant live my life with out you.
So why do you lie still in my arms?
Iâ€™m taken in by your innocent charms.
Please wake up form this everlasting sleep,
Seeing you so still and solemn cuts me deep.
Please awake and say your ok,
In my arms you can not stay.
Will my tears heal your heart?
Please stop this its tearing me apart.
How can I live with out your smile?
Are happiness only lasted for a short while.
Your body lies motionless and yet still so serene,
So much torture you have seen.
Maybe now your mind will be at rest,
Though why did you surrender lifeâ€™s test.
Iâ€™ll pray for you every night,
Hoping to see you once again in my
But your heart lives on inside of me,
Least now I know that you are free.
I think about you every day,
knowing youâ€™re only a memory away
Please, if youâ€™ve read my poem could you please spend the quick minute to rate or comment on my poem. I would greatly appreciate it. I love to hear from you all and read your comments.
by Jayden Mackwell
This reminds me of when my gf Kimmi died. It was a while ago, but I can still relate.
Very powerful write. A lot of emotion coming out of it *thumbsup*
wow . your poems are soooo amazing they really do touch the heart you can feel the emotions in them they are spectacular!!! keep it up id love to read more...
by Drake Takeyama
Wow, I'm impressed Amy. You never cease to amaze me. The poem is great except for one small detail. I'm not dead yet. But i would like to die by your side.
Wow, so sad and full of emotions....who did you write this to??? Hope it's not a true story!!! Another great poem, you have talent!! I give this 5 too...