Sensations Beyond Love

by Sunshine   Sep 6, 2010


Perhaps the sun rises
perhaps the sun sets
Nevertheless there is
nothing in-between..

As tireless wind
fails to rest ..
Emotions tangle my heart
as the dancing wind
tumble me out,
then tumble me in
away and toward..
From and to the love
that's scrambling
sleepy sensations
of passion..

Yet neither dance,
nor shed tears with me..
Not the sweetness of a kiss
or the bitterness of the pain
would propel me forward..
Or even crown the beginning
of my day, or praise
the end of it

Because for this person I am
"Love" differs ..
so does a sunset, and a sunrise
For me love rises through
his presence
and sets as he's gone
The sun brightens through his eyes
and glows with his touch

And for those who say
other wise,or for those
who think from east
or west the sun would set
or the sun would rise..
I wonder, if they've ever
loved..

By: Rania Moallem

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  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Because for this person I am
    "Love" differs ..
    so does a sunset, and a sunrise
    For me love rises through
    his presence
    and sets as he's gone
    The sun brightens through his eyes
    and glows with his touch

    ^^

    Indeed this is how love should be, Nana. You worded it well, as usual:)

    Yet neither dance with me
    nor share with me tears..

    ^^
    The words in these two lines are placed in the wrong order.

    You did well on this, love to read your work.

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Very descriptive of the two sides of love ,
    I enjoyed reading it ...5/5...Jim

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    As tireless wind
    fails to rest ..
    Emotions tangle my heart
    as the dancing wind
    tumble me out,
    then tumble me in
    away and toward..
    From and to the love
    that's scrambling
    sleepy sensations
    of passion..

    As I read this verse it reminds me of the ocean’s waves pulling & pushing that is the effect I got from this verse…good!

    Because for this person I am
    "Love" differs ..
    so does a sunset, and a sunrise
    For me love rises through
    his presence
    and sets as he's gone
    The sun brightens through his eyes
    and glows with his touch

    Ahhh..such is love isn’t it! Their very presence is like the sunrise in our life. This verse beautifully brings out the tender feelings of love.

    A poem which can go either way..a love loved and then lost or love that feels just from one side..enjoyed the read :)

  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    A lovely piece! I like the gentleness of this piece, it was kind of soothing! I think what you wrote about was very unique, its an interesting way of writing this. And i Loved it !! :D That second lasst stanza was ah-mazing! really good work here naza!

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The flow and rhythmn is just unbievable though I felt it The imagery is as incredible but I saw it .... to borrow a phrase you are phenominal

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