Mountain Tops

by Lady Nik   Dec 22, 2010


A single line of light
shines down to Earth...
a tear has fallen somewhere
to mask this river of hurt.
Dead..laid slain by
the murderer inside the
brain. Words crash together
to help us remember
the worst days of our life.

I saw the sun set on mountain tops

I never knew it would be
the world turning its
back on me forever.

Forgotten..I no longer exist
in this life anymore. My soul
has been sucked out
through a frosted straw
by the evil held by my
own demons. The sun has
met dawn and she has ended me...

Now everyone knows why
the mountain tops bleed
red--

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  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Forgotten..I no longer exist
    in this life anymore. My soul
    has been sucked out
    through a frosted straw
    by the evil held by my
    own demons. The sun has
    met dawn and she has ended me...

    What an image you have drawn here with words..very moving!

    Now everyone knows why
    the mountain tops bleed
    red--

    This is so touching with a strong note of sadness..well written.

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Nik, this one is really sad...spl this stanza somewhat scared me

    My soul
    has been sucked out
    through a frosted straw
    by the evil held by my
    own demons.

    Great choice of words here, even the thought is mindblowing.
    Great write

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nik
    This poem is so full of dispair and sadness. So much lonliness crys from your words. Great imagery and word choices.

    Forgotten..I no longer exist
    in this life anymore. My soul
    has been sucked out
    through a frosted straw
    by the evil held by my
    own demons. The sun has
    met dawn and she has ended me...

    Now everyone knows why
    the mountain tops bleed
    red--

    I love your ending. You did an excellent job!
    Love Cindy

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