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Nice poem keep writing

Thank you so much :)

I think you have the perfect emotions and truth to write this poem , but I think we should start helping each other out how to write a perfect poem :) so I will give you an edit version of your poem, just with some polishing. and it's up for you to like it or not..
you can disagree I will just be giving tips on how to make a poem really beautiful simply.

And however if you don't like the changes, make sure to change :

didnt = didn't
dont = don't
theres -there's

^^grammar is really important for the clarity of the poem, and for us to get the real meaning behind your work :) , and if you did not take care of your poems, no one will give you the care you want..okay this is how i would change it...if it was mine :

I try to be nice, to be myself,
to be, what never seems to
be enough

You think you know me, or that
you can read me well
but you got the wrong facts

Maybe you should look again
read me from deep within,
like you really care

Bother sense, and hold out your hand,
stretch well to reach my soul
for there;s a reason why you feel like
you are all alone

it lays beyond the way, you act with others,
it lays in the fact that you never really bother

to find the key .