Torn apart

by Meme   Feb 16, 2011


Torn apart between you two
Not knowing which one is true

You I love with all my heart
& You are simply my sweetheart

You make me reach for the stars
& you take away all my scars

You fight for me many wars
& you claim my heart is yours

You write me loves poems
& you play me love tones

You gaze deep into my eyes
& you make my heart beats rise

You sacrificed your life for me
& you were the one to set me free

You want me with all my flaws
& you broke for me all the laws

Torn apart between you two
Not knowing which one is true

I don't know which one to choose
I don't know which one I'll loose

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 13 years ago

    by IBRAHIM DWIDAR

    Again u prove ur abilities girl, this poem was so good, i liked the way u describe ur confusion here a lot, u could really describe it very well and again u didn't miss the rhyme, the melody is still flows through all the poem, i give u 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Very beautiful. The expression of love and not know which direction to turn, not knowing if losing one means gaining something better.
    Truly Amazing!

  • 13 years ago

    by Stephy

    Choose the one your heart calls you for the most. The one your most comfortable with. The one you feel you can trust more. The one you can see yourself with the most. The one who treats you the best.

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