Breezing Sweat

Feeling the pain and sadness, yet a tinge of hope for the new day! Even though one smiles to conceal. Nice read. :)

Ohh what a good poem :))

That was so sweet and tende..
a very gd flow, and it worked so well!

You give love a completely different meaning in your poems. Its been ages since I've read one of these... I must say, you improve with each new one. Enjoyed reading it... brought back so many memories.

PS. have u read your PM?

Nitin
Once again your pen has weaved magic in your words.

Justifying self created composure
Dreaming is worth sleeping for
Nightmares don't dare come close
While I knock at memory's door

How nice it would be to be able to go back to times when love was new and simple. Before life makes things complicated and brings negative feelings to relationships. Where sleep is the place where we can bring back all the sinple loving times once more. If only we could live in our dreams.

Seems we survived another night
Time has come to enter dreams
Wake up with sound of birds
And smile to conceal screams

Waking to a new day. Smiling and pretending things are good. When we are really crying inside.
Excellent job yaar!
Love Cindy