Summer(Tanka)

by Jad Jun 20, 2011 category : Nature, environment / nature

Scorching flames above
cascade unrelenting heat,
drying and killing
lush green fields and dense forest,
yet calm winds reprieves heats wrath.

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14 years ago
by Meena Krish

Sounds like the summer is not only creating
scorching heat but also a wild fire..nicely done with this form!
14 years ago
by Kuro

Very eloquent wording. gives a sense of unrest, but it is somehow calming. its hard to explain. nice write.

~kuro