The secret

by Jenni   Jun 22, 2011


I got a secret
Too dark to tell
Inside of me
Not letting go
What to do
I don't know
Creeping me up
All around
It should stop
I'm on the ground
It's pushing me down
Makes me drop
More and more
Though on the floor
Should i say it?
Simply admit?
Will it help
Or make it worse
This wasn't expected
I wasn't prepared
Don't want to be rejected
Nobody cared
Pointing at me
I want to flee
Is it my imagination
Thoughts haunting me?
My own creation?
Please set me free

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  • 14 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is definatly a 5! I love this, your choice of words is amazing. Magnificent!!

  • 14 years ago

    by LockedAway

    Great word use i really like this poem u deffinetly get a 5 from me

  • 14 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Hmmm, this is interesting. :)

    I have for you one suggestion, try to write a free verse, I'm sure you will ROCK :)
    the sadness wasn't that clear, some expressions were just over-used and cliche :/
    the first two lines were eye-catchy!

    nevertheless, a good write. keep writing

    five!

  • 14 years ago

    by Liliana

    How i understand this, secrets can eat you inside and you really express it love it

  • 14 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Is it my imagination
    Thoughts haunting me?
    My own creation?
    Please set me free

    love them for lines amazing writing your very talented

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