Vicious Mask

by Meme   Jun 27, 2011


You put on your black suit
And your favorite grey tie
I start guessing as usual
To whom is your next lie

You wander around people
Wearing your vicious mask
Searching through the crowds
Looking for your next task

You spot her a mile way
So you start with the walk
So confident, so sure that
She will fall after the first talk

Then you start your ugly game again
Sucking the life out of your prey
You leave her laying there in the dark
To be found by someone the next day

Once you are done, you come back to me
But I know you are different than any man
You wait for me to surrender to sleep
Only to wear that suit and mask again

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem was very interesting as it sort of told a story. I felt you penned a great poem here. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This was really good and unique you wrote this really well and everyone can understand the story really good peice 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Its sad poem... really dark. and u created a good image. so reader can imagine all the story behind it.. good idea and work

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Wow you really managed to do something that I havent went for, since a long while..
    this is an amazing piece with amazing word choice!

    I love the mode of your opening stanza, it's very interesting and interlingual with its dark suspense,,,jhust loved it..

    this was my favorite:

    You spot her a mile way
    So you start with the walk

    (Y)
    and thissssss

    Once you are done, you come back to me
    But I know you are different than any man

    ^very very interesting MeeeMEEE
    with an eppiic ending
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I really liked this piece it's reads in well and is true of lots of people we have all worn marks at some point :) as usual prom the heart and fantastic :) :)

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