The betrayal of bloody tears

by BaybeBlew   Jun 21, 2004


These tears streaked red
Stain this blade
He made her do this
Cause she was played

She never once thought
That he'd ever cheat
But she was blinded
By his infernal deceit

Pleading his innocence
But he's swimming in sin
She could smell it on his shirt
She could smell it on his skin

She digs the knife deeper
As the blood starts to pour
Streaking down her arm
And onto the floor

bruised and wounded
She can't find peace
These tears of red
Are her only release

Cutting...I don't understand it, this probably the closest I'll get...

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  • 19 years ago

    by gasping for air

    sorrow is such a... raw emotion, i guess is what i want to say.... and you know how they say depression is an outcry for help... well in my case its an outcry for attention.... see, i shouldnt even be telling you this... but i am cuz i want that attention and the pity.... im such a pathetic human being...
    loves and hugs
    Manda Lynn

  • 19 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    sad poem... but brilliant one =) i loved your piece =) anyway thank u for posting a comment on mine =) oh i gave urs a 5=) ciao

  • 19 years ago

    by yup

    Wow. An extremly powerful poem about a sad situation. I really enjoyed it although it was sad. A great poem overall.
    Keep writing =)

    ~Kelly