Tired

Nana the title of this is simple but it caught my attention, WHY!?

this was short yet really powerful, bhaniki on such a write!!!!!

Again this poem reminds me of my dream I had last night. I woke up without breath, I was terrified and it was just absolutely haunting. This says so much in so little, I particularly like the first stanza. I think it held the meat of the poem, even though it was so short. :) Beautiful, beautiful!

I'm not sure what else is left to say, every comment up there is true, it's heartbreaking, it's more than sad, it's deep, emotional, yet so addictive to read. It's more than beautiful. I felt a flutter in my stomach when reading <3 Your words really do get my heart :) You've a wonderful way of portraying such sadness.

5/5 <3

It would be nice, Nana, if you didn't live so far away. Then we could sit side by side and stare into the campfire and talk about life, and love, and about how stupid and short sighted men are. I hear you hun, I hear you in this verse....I think the world of you:) Don't let anything or anybody drag you down, not ever. Girl power is what you need, make a life for yourself, make THEM beg;)

I love the second part best, and I hope you will find that peace of mind, and never let anyone take that from you again.

5/5 Ingrid

I feel this to be unique is some way I can't put my finger on it but I love the wording and it's really good :)