The BreakUp Poem

by La Reina De Corazones   Sep 9, 2011


Soon i will be but a memory
long forgotten
in Ur mind
and although i will miss u terribly
i plead that u don't forget the special times we once shared

those wonderfully blissfully nights we shared in Ur bed
the time we went to the beach and kissed like there wasn't else there
when i brought u to my parents house and announced u were my bf and said " i hope u like him CZ if u don't i don't care"
not to mention the time when i told u i loved u underneath that one bright night

i know what I'm going to say will bring tears to Ur eyes
u probably won't wan t to see me for the rest of Ur natural born life
I'm sorry it this hurts u but i can't be Ur gf anymore but i will always be here if u still want to be friends
don't look at the bad times we shared look at the good times
erase those times that u just knew that this day would come sooner rather than latter
promise me that I'll look towards the future and not dwell in the past
I'll soon find a better person than myself 2 spend the rest of Ur life i promise

id never deserved Ur love, kindness and trust cause every time u gave me all those thing i threw them to the wind
i hurt u , i lied but i never cheated on u
somewhere inside me a voice said "u don't deserve a man like this one"
unfortunately i proved proved that voice right and all i have to say now to you is "I'm SO sorry for causing u pain but this is the last hurt i will cause u i promise on my very soul

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  • 11 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    Mother I know how this is and it is so emotional.
    The feel of it is amazing.
    Reading it made me feel like it was surrounding me.
    The life is possesses it unique and I love it.
    It is like it was a play and I was enjoying the show.
    Mom I love it so I give you 5/5.
    You did wonderful.
    Like always.
    Love Always & Forever,
    ~Dominique~ <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    This is pretty good. good emotion. very overwhelming and sad. but its in more of a story format instead of stanzas. awesome poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Dave

    Very good and hear felt with true emotions at time its flow was a little off

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Aw girl, this is so touching.
    Trying so hard to not break his heart but wanting him to always remember the memories. Letting him know your love is true, but that you just can't do it anymore.
    I love this poem,
    I could see the events playing out and feeling the raw emotion.
    Great Job
    :)
    5/5

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