by Colm Sep 10, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Glazing at the nail-hard rain |
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Truly sad and amazing. |
by Decayed
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Interesting poem. Sad enough, and honest in many ways, I think.. |
by The Queen
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Interesting poem you've got here,Colm. Not your usual style but I'm loving it. I thought the poem was effective because, it used repetition, alliteration and rhythm, the poem is well structured and uses good use of metaphors. |