Fiat

by Colm   Sep 10, 2011


Glazing at the nail-hard rain
from the front seat of my comatose
'95 Fiat, with its echoing tank
and red-rusted doors was, strangely,
when I came to remember
reading in bed every morning.

And that morning,
how we had a pillow fight.

'You're musical, and unprecedented.
Your eyes are sticky as mud.'
It was a fog-heavy daze
the morning we kissed.

Now the gold band on your finger,
is a blindingly neon promise
too early in the morning
to read properly.

So as I sit here in my '95 Fiat,
watching the rain pincushion my windscreen,
Ill consider becoming the cannonball
you always want me to be.

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  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Truly sad and amazing.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Interesting poem. Sad enough, and honest in many ways, I think..

    I liked the images here, the thoughts, the repetition, and the smooth flow.. It felt..cozy?

    :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen

    Interesting poem you've got here,Colm. Not your usual style but I'm loving it. I thought the poem was effective because, it used repetition, alliteration and rhythm, the poem is well structured and uses good use of metaphors.