by Joseph Boadi Sep 12, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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With my groggy looks and dagger bitten skin |
by vip
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Lovely poem! |
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You have talent |
by Jenni
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I really loved the ending. I actually think, that this is a well written poem, but I agree to SpiritRising about the punctuation part. I like how you described everything really detailed, that painted a really vivid image, well done. |
by The Po whet
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A good piece,just like the previous ones. |
by Liliana
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Yeah this is good:) I really like some choice of words here keep it up |