by Joseph Boadi          Sep 12, 2011
    
        category :
            Dark, fantasy /
            dark, horror
            
    
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            With my groggy looks and dagger bitten skin | 
by vip
| Lovely poem! | 
| You have talent | 
by Jenni
| I really loved the ending. I actually think, that this is a well written poem, but I agree to SpiritRising about the punctuation part. I like how you described everything really detailed, that painted a really vivid image, well done. | 
by The Po whet
| 
            A good piece,just like the previous ones. | 
 
    by Liliana
| Yeah this is good:) I really like some choice of words here keep it up |