Missing (acrostic and palindrome)

by Dark Secrets   Sep 13, 2011


Memory knelling and gnawing
internally trilling wave's nestled
Seared hole dormant interminably
seeking unknown stopple
inevitably unbridling sinfully
Nostalgia is severely ignited
greatly yowling hails misery

- Apt to look for the fallen tooth of spring -

Misery hails, yowling greatly
ignited severely is nostalgia
sinfully unbridling inevitably
Stopple unknown seeking
interminably dormant hole seared
Nestled wave's trilling internally
gnawing and knelling memory

written for a club contest, with the following rules:
1) 7 lines long or more
2) acrostic or palindrome
3) less than 3 syllable title
4) At least 10 of the words included:
* Havoc
* Rescue
* Sear
* Tea
* Unbridle
* Knell
* Apt
* Grand
* Sin/Sins/Sinful
* Throb
* Windowsill(s)
* Youth
* Wreckage
* Yowl
* Avenue
* Dormant
* Doomsday
* Trill
* Wave
* Hail
* Haw
5) Add:
* A mythological God/Goddess.
* Or use a name of month or a season:
* Or a name of a flower. Use it as a symbol.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Darren

    This is great and right up my street, I have been mixing a few forms recently, I love your take on the palindrome, it is like the poem is sitting on a mirror, well done

  • 8 years ago

    by Amreen

    Masterpiece must say!!! What an endeavour... palindrome itself is a task and you just did a fabulous job... Hats offf!!!

    :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Exostosis

    You pulled off an acrostic and a palindrome with one piece. Quite an accomplishment you've got here. And the piece in itself is composed very well.

  • 9 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I have to go with Ingrid, shazam excellent piece

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Gee...I am awestruck, lol. It is so hard to write a Palindrome and you pulled it off and even made both stanzas into acrostics, and included all those words!

    Very well done:)

    5/5 Ingrid