by Captain Lonesome Sep 19, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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I remember, as each day passes less and less, |
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Nicely done, this read smooth as silk with not flaws or choppy places. Awesome |
by kiara
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This is absolutely beautiful!!!!!! |
by average thoughts
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Wow..beautifuly written..jus evry line is hrtfelt..5/5 |
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I can't think tonight, no witty comment or suggestion. I'll just say great job all the way round. |
by The Queen
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Such a sad piece you've penned here! I loved how each line and title connect with each other. The flow and rhythm were stunning probably because of its perfect rhyme. Good job! |