Our First Date

by nouriguess   Sep 30, 2011


I've waited years for her
in forgotten stations, amidst
ghostly Winters and
hallow skies.

Never imagined her to be
that sincere like autumn poetry
or like birthday wishes.

Never guessed we would meet
in this place, I've always
thought to embrace her
'tween endless Aprils
and tearless nights
or at least beyond the sky.

We had a conversation,
that ended me up pondering
upon the origin of the stars,
fathoming to my very self,
anticipating to find a crescent
hidden down there.

I confessed everything
in a moment of precious
weakness and bittersweet
secrets, till every scar
within my palm faded
and every love within
my eyes jaded.

Then as she glanced at my core
once the noise of my heartbeats
silenced time, I thought

for one second,
she could stretch her hands
to reality out of the mirror.

By : Noura Hatem.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is very creative.
    The imagery is amazing, the flow smooth.
    All round fab piece.

    Em

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This was the frosting on the cake Miss Poetess. :)

    for one second,
    she could stretch her hands
    to reality out of the mirror.

    So very creative you are. Nice poem Dollface! Congrats on winning!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessie

    Absolutely beautiful. This is a piece that becomes more wonderful after each read. Good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Reed

    Wow... just Wow!

    5/5

    Gratz

  • 12 years ago

    by Jon914

    Hey congradulations on your win, you deserve it