Water Overflowing

by believeinlove87   Oct 8, 2011


Water overflowing out of the bathtub,
cold as ice,
dripping down onto the tile floor,
soaking up the bathroom rug,
slowly turning red,
from her sliced wrists.

Razor floating in the water,
pulse barely beating,
heart slowing down,
eyes rolling back into her head,
shes slowly fading away.

Life isn't worth living,
nothing ever goes her way,
constant bulling, repeated name calling,
can't a nice word be said she thinks,
giving up the only option,
she can only be so strong for so long.

Drip, Drip, Drip,
water and the blood mixing as one,
filling up the bathroom floor,
slowly dying in the cold harsh bath tub,
ending her life all together,
two deep cuts on her wrists,
whispering goodbye world,
the girl who fought hard to survive,
couldn't handle the pain anymore.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    Wow, I loved the description in this !!
    It flowed really well and your word choice is great :)) one again brilliant 5/5 !

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    Wow, I loved the description in this !!
    It flowed really well and your word choice is great :)) one again brilliant 5/5 !

  • 12 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    Absolutely love how you described each scene.
    love the word selection
    full of sadness
    awww..it brought tears to my eyes.
    really touching poem.
    AWESOME once again!
    10000/1000 :)