A Moments Thought

by Captain Lonesome   Oct 12, 2011


I just don't care
I am not scared
Just to worn down
Now wear a frown
Too far I've fell
Deep into hell
Slowly climbing
Feels like dying
Wishing for more
Can't wait to sore
High in the sky
So why can't I
See what's keeping
Me from seeking
What I'm meant for
Known in my core
Burdon, am I?
Sorry I tried!
My enemy
Seems to be me
Pounding my head
My own blood shed
I'm bound and tied
From deep inside
Wept on the floor
Can't take no more
Feel like a bum
Sipping on rum
I've had enough
Its not to tough
No more despair
Just need some air
Tomorrows new
For me and you

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  • 8 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    As I read the feeling of hopelessness or desperation rang loudly in my ears. Wanting a better life then what has been dished out.
    Had a nice flow, though the lines being so short was a little distracting for me..:-) hey I confuse easy what can I say lol
    Overall excellent

    Connie

  • 8 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow I keep reading this poem over and over kinda like a puzzle hard to solve,,,I did enjoy reading it I guess I would call it interesting but wonderful,,,I loved it 5/5 :)