Chocolate

by nouriguess   Oct 16, 2011


Sometimes, I like you
with hazelnuts

liquefied, bow-shaped
like a brown rainbow
so warm and

lofty

I relish the gist of
you with my yearning
tongue, so wrapped
up, so lured.

Oh, how I like to
find you
in small golden cages
upon Grandma's
little closet

or melted inside
a sweaty hand of
a kid.

I'd taste you all day
long, daub you along
rolls

offer you at breakfast,
lunch and dinner

lay you down in a cozy
basket and present it
to myself at Winter

dress your limbs with
russet woolen sweaters
and send you to him

If only

you were off
these stubborn,

repulsive
calories.

By : Noura Hatem.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lioness

    Wow!

    A poem that went straight to my heart... and thighs, and butt!!!

    Seriously I loved the words you expressed, so vivid, so tempting!

    Carlories or no calories Imma have my chocolate!

    x

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem was a mix of things at one point I felt the poem was about sentimental memories - "Oh, how I like to
    find you
    in small golden cages
    upon Grandma's
    little closet"

    Then I felt it was about being sensual - "I'd taste you all day
    long, daub you along
    my breasts"

    Then I thought it was about an eating disorder - "If only
    you were off
    these stubborn,
    repulsive
    calories."

    This poem (and your last one) really showed you as diverse and deep writer. You know how to give a poem more than one meaning which makes the reader think and build a stronger connection to the poems

    you never fail to keep my interest

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A chocolate lovers poem for sure, one that can be easily understood and makes the reader run to the store, for you made if even more seductive then normally thought
    My favorite lines. A wonderful tribute to something I love lol

    Oh, how I like to
    find you
    in small golden cages
    upon Grandma's
    little closet

  • 14 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Maybe one day I'll write a poem about them.

  • 14 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    HAHAHAHHAHAHA THIS MADE MY DAY....
    OMG...YOU CLEVER LITTLE VIXEN..HOW DO YOU EVEN...

    AH...

    P.S I know you're obsessed with your own breast..they are here again.. lmao

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