Without a Little Help From My Friends

by Kuro   Oct 17, 2011


"What would you do If I sang out of key?
Would you stand up and walk out on me?
Lend me your ears and I will sing you a song
And I'll try not to sing out of key."

I got stabbed in the back by my friends;
Forgotten and left for dead by my friends;
So I learned to get by without friends.

Eventually I learn not to sing at all.
They have stolen the song from my lips.
Deep in my heart I desire to sing,
But I'm afraid I've forgotten the words.

I got stabbed in the back by my friends;
Ignored and left for dead by my friends
So I'd rather go on without friends.

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This is a darker version of the song WITH A LITTLE HELP FROM MY FRIENDS by THE BEATLES. words inside the "Quotations" are quotes from the original song.

edit: by "darker" i mean a perversion and corruption of something originally pure.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Love every twisted word you've written, id write a longer comment but I'm using my mobile on break, will write a longer one later but bravo ben!

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Brilliant! I loved how you used a song to inspire you to write and to connect the song with your emotions. Music is a beautiful thing that can inspire us and sometimes bandage emotional wounds. Nice write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    It is indeed very sad because we know friends who help but those we trust kill us makes it worse..a deeply touching write.

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    It's always difficult to be able to start trusting again after a person who you thought was your friend wrongs you. :(

    A good poem, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Sad or dark, matters not. For you are family.

    Dude if you sang out of key, I'd say welcome to the club :P

    Eventually I learn not to sing at all.
    They have stolen the song from my lips.
    Deep in my heart I desire to sing,
    But I'm afraid I've forgotten the words.

    This part is definitely sad. Friends depriving one of his essence and lust to sing.

    A brilliant composition. Penned. . =)

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