Inhale .. Exhale

by Meme   Oct 27, 2011


You wave me into
different directions,
drowning me in a sea
of endless thoughts.

You hug me so tight
that I can easily lose
my breath, but then
you release me for that
last grasp of air.

Then you whisper in my
ears "Thats how love
speaks in the language
of life". It simply leaves
you breathless!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Wauh thats good

  • 12 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    WOW!!! I loved this poem so much!!!! Good work!!! :) This brought tears to my heart from how sweet it was!!! :) I'm still smiling!!! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Yes, sooo true, it leaves you breathless. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Funny how each poem has a different way of describing love. I think this was one of realism, it does leave you gasping for air, the last emotional breath. Great flow, read easy, smoothly..Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    And indeed, you left me breathless Meme.

    I like how smooth, yet vivid your images were.

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