Shallow

'never held a frown as beautiful...'

Beaaautiful lines. It had this strong 'aw' factor and the same time I pictured a gorgeous woman bawling. lol I guess thats not really funny, I don't know why I'm laughing. Oh dear.

I like reading the 'dark companion', it was smart and really true to the poem. ;)

"I can't help but wonder
if those walls around me can get
any colder, or did it finally reach the peak"

This has got to be one of the best endings I've read in a long time. This is so strong, so dark, so sad.. so...stop it! What happened to your happy poetry? Lol. It's no surprise that you wowed me with this poem, all of your work, especially sad, definitely hits me to the core. I felt what you felt, it hit me so hard. This is beautiful poetry, Nana, for sure.

Oh.my.god

MY Dear Friend,

Its the voice of a very sad heart people. i just wonder sometimes how you put so sadness in your writing and your any single poem makes me feel about your master piece.

come to the poem now.

its sad first of all and one thing i seen the relation of the sentences. that link with another word and make the strong and unbroken chain of emotions. never ever i keep my eyes off from your poetry. i always fall in and in...

i talk to myself and say to me that yes! this is the master piece but whenever i read the next i feel the same for latest. this is an art and God given you this gift. and you do it better.

my favorite part in this poem is :

such a dark companion sharing
with me the roads I seek.
Shallow life, shallow people,
hollow houses, shallow words
to speak...I can't help but wonder
if those walls around me can get
any colder,

this is my favorite lines. i think its the most saddest chain you make with your meaningful words. never stop writing. you are simply the great. 5/5