Luscious Craving

by Innocent Fairy   Jan 3, 2012


It's burning, each day
I feel the craving stronger
as it lingers; as evil desires

It seduces my mind,
inside my dreams,
the tempting need

It's a hunger
and absent pleasure
while being sustained

It's strong and
takes over,
controls my actions
with absent thinking

Revoke this feeling
Relinquish this desire
that's taunting me

The passion it stirs
and grows with fire,
just a touch
could make it wonder

It dwells in my thoughts,
in my dreams
and it burns like fire

It's seductive
and alarming

It's a lustful urge,
luscious pleasure,
I feel it prowling

It is a craving
I wish to forsake,
to end the torture;
I remain

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This poem is emotionally dynamic, the flow constantly keeps enchanting the reader. You chose words that's so pleasant to the ears. I admire the simplicity yet very magnificent in thoughts. Its appealing to the mind, keep up the wonderful work. KUDOS!

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This poem is emotionally dynamic, the flow constantly keeps enchanting the reader. You chose words that's so pleasant to the ears. I admire the simplicity yet very magnificent in thoughts. Its appealing to the mind, keep up the wonderful work. KUDOS!

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow.. this poem is amazing.. I love it! I was captivated from the start! You built this craving from beginning to end, and it was really intriguing. I was kind of hoping you would reveal what the craving was at the end, but it still is interesting that you left it a mystery.

    Great job with this poem! It was a great joy to read :)

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    I have to agree with Tangerine here. Ha ha! Looks like raging hormones set on fire.
    Sensual, stormy, seductive, sexy, literotica.
    Do we need to send a fire engine or find that luscious (=sweet) guy ?

    Love it! 5 chocolates for that guy who can bring out so much chocolate cravings.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tangerine

    Sounds like a bad case of libido ;)