Unveiled Aura

by Meme   Jan 22, 2012


Don't drift
away from the
roughness I hide
in; I may be a
sorceress. But
who knows ?

I awaited endless
waves for you to
catch me, to
mesmerize you.

Now ...

Cautiously,
lift me up, and
rest me on a high
pedestal.

It takes eternity
to understand
my aura; rarity.

- Cherish me.

Let only your
eyes be seduced
by my curse, for I am
- a black pearl.

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© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is my favourite poem so far among your collection, been reading it over and over for days. Couldn't just find the right words to shower praises on this exquisite and rare type of poetry. Using a gem to compose a poem is unique but 'black pearl' is out of space. The poem differs in various meaning to me, has a touch of challenge, self-esteem, discovery and sadness. It's a total package, i think you're talking about yourself here but in a subtle manner with a sophisticated approach. Excellent and so so so amazing, KUDOS!!! Dear ;-}

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    I am so enchanted by this poem! it is so beautiful, and was unique and different. I love the topic, and I love how you wrote this, the flow was so breezy and nice to read, lol if that makes sense.

    I LOVE the title btw - I think not only are you a great and amazing poet, but you are really wonderful with choose great titles! I think a great title is really important!

    This poem was such a lovely read... it's flawless and enchanting... for some reason I thought of The Little Mermaid and Pirates of the Caribbean (but that's only because of the black pearl part) .. I love how you know your self-worth and you compare yourself to a rare and unique black pearl. It was a beautiful comparison, and you really are an amazing person!

    Amazing poem sweetie :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Wow, this is beautiful, did I forget to comment hehe, I am still in a wow state everytime read this. And actually I disagree with kiko and Lp, it made it very interesting to have your own way of describing an unveiled Aura..wow so creative in my opinion..

    you are a creative person, and such a precious pearl to my heart.
    This is magnificent.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kiko

    This is a cute poem with some interesting imagery. I do agree with LP that the title should be changed to "Black Pearl," and then you would not need to have the words "black pearl" in the poem, since the reader would know that is what you are trying to describe.

    Also, "sorcerous" should be "sorceress."

    Overall, nicely penned!

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    There is something about this poem that is really grabs the reader. It's short and dynamic in tone and flow
    Good job as usual

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