Beautiful Thoughts (Collab with Ms Sunshine)

This is wonderful. You two did a really good job in coming up with

Some things are beautiful thoughts
but I shall finish it up just right here;
for they cannot spin into reflections
that twirl our dreams into something real

Life leave us speechless sometimes,
so we mime but our thoughts are loud.
Battling a long trail of silent beliefs,
on what's rejected and what's allowed

Some dreams would mimic our realities;
or bring the life to a thought in our mind.
Although they may last for a minute or so,
we live a possibility, our reality declined

It's tough to split the firm walls we've been
carrying around, or those we're born inside.
But to close windows we bear within our eyes
seems impossible -oh it is impossible to hide

^^ I love these stanzas alot and the poem is magnificent :) u two did great together and can't really tell who wrote what,,it's amazing with great flow and rhyme with amazing wording,,wonderfully done 5/5

Fluid and full of imagery.
Rhyme was spot on with out a single flaw. Everything about this was exquisite. Good job you two

The flow and rhyming is brilliantly done here. Doesn't feel like it's written by two different person. The sync of thoughts and putting them in words beautiful.

/So write me -a beautiful coincidence-
on the corners of your thoughts
And I will capture you -a still photo-
taken in a moment of distraught.

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These are my favorite lines. The imagery here is brilliant ...

overall, a wonderful treat, to read two talents in one :)

An awesome poem for the both of you. The rhyming was so flawless like it came so naturally rather than forced.

You two make an awesome team!!!

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