Don't Give Up Life's Fight My Close Friend

by CathyButterflyJC   Jan 29, 2012


You've hit your saddest peak,
You're on my mind and what you speak.

So I can't sleep,
I can't get out of my head the sound of your weep.

You wish more than anything to get off this ride,
I know you're hurting mightily inside.

You think you're fat,
But your beautiful inside and out.

So many people have come to you and dissed,
I wish you knew how much your really missed.

It wasn't easy when those guys lied,
They took your pride and now it's fried.

We got through that then,
With the help of a friend,
and the power of a pen.
Your depression seemed to come to an end.

We thought you had it bad,
You forgot about the good times life had.

Life has more then one verse,
Your life turned and things got worse.
After they got so much better,
I tried to be your nurse.
Your Dad left leaving a major curse,
Your eyes became wetter.
His return came quickly,
But a repeat was a fear thickly.

Your efforts in class fill as grades slipped,
Sometimes you were betrayed and whipped.

To school you then rarely came,
I begged you to return but it was all the same,
You thought school was a meaningless game,
All your grieve could not be tamed.

When things at home got rough,
You tried so hard to be tough.

You got yourself into trouble,
And you felt traped in a bubble.

Made of your own sad thought,
Wondering why happiness could not be brought.

You hid your feelings behind items,
Then you told someone about your home problems.

Someone high on the line for help,
You want to get out so you throw a yelp.

Then you got even rougher times,
You were pulled away not to see old friends, not even sometimes.

They found you a home far away,
But you screamed all night and cried all day.

You wished to take back your lines,
You cried because you couldn't reverse your past
reverse.

We tell each other everything,
Friendship is the best thing to bring.

You've had so many plows,
The worst part is right now.

You are not alright,
I wish I could talk to you all night.

Get you through life's fight,
Make the darkness bright.

You're talking about deadly wishes,
Ways to make your life barish.

You talk about taking your own life,
To use anything for a knife.

Your wrist are cut,
Your good night sleeps are shut.
I tried to think positive but you say no buts.

Your scared and feel oh so alonely,
You open up but to me only.

There's so much you use to aim for,
I want you to realize that you're not done for.

You miss your boyfriend,
You miss me your best friend.

You'll be okay,
This isn't your last day.

You've never been in so much pain,
But I will be your strongest cain.
So much pain,
Your heart has gained.

You threaten to kill yourself,
With that you hold so much force.
You've gotten deep to unknowingly cutting yourself,
You think suicide is now your source.
Writing is more of a worth,
And you're good with that worded sort.

You scare me half to death,
Would you really stop your breath.

I've never seen you this upset,
It's been so long since we first met.

Hold on strong,
Your brave and you belong.

Don't let,
Fear make you a pet.

It will be all right,
You have so much might.

You will find a light,
Don't give up life's fight.

I love you!
My close friend!
Like a sister to the end!

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  • 10 years ago

    by Treehugger

    Wow Cathy I read this WHOLE thing and it made em get teary eyed. where do I start wow. First of all I love how you made a story out of something so deep. Every line is getting deeper into something so sad and the downfall of this friend of yours. Its always reassuring to have a friend when you are down.

    I am glad you wrote this, every line is detailed perfectly I can imagine myself there and feeling your love and friendship.

    I love the lines 'you felt trapped inside a bubble, made by your own thoughts' That line is written perfectly and it speaks truth. We all feel like we are in our own bubble trapped and never being able to get out of our thoughts.

    I also love the lines " you miss your boyfriend, you miss me your best friend". That is also very true. Its hard being alone with sadness.

    At night it is also hard being alone when you isolate yourself from everyone. Your words are perfect and speak beautifully to the writer sadness. 5/5 no question!