by Maple Tree Feb 6, 2012
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Beautiful formations |
by Decayed
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Andrea, this poem feels alive because of those drops you have added, and then you continued describing them perfectly till the end... and I loved how you said they formed a heart shape. I can infer that the tears are falling helplessly from your eyes, and that you still love the person. amazing. |
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Your format is creative. I enjoy reading something new and different good Job :) |
by Karla
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I admit I love your writings. You always surprise me with something different. |
by Ole Carsten
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Dew dripping, pain, self healing |
by Lioness
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I love this! I love how images are incorporated in poems and I love what you have done with the drops of tears falling |