I dont think, I know and believe that this is one of your finest arts, Sarah, it was interesting to read from the 1st line! Actually from the opening words, very interesting wording.
I love your pressure on the same tone, loved the conxn of your ideas and definitely loved the mood. Somehow different to see from yyou, like this gloominess, I love your Love poems, but I think now, I love all the genres you write. you have reached this level where you are being able to leave an impact with whatever thought you need to elaborate.
hats off, this was really very heartfelt, and it left a lump in my throat, honest...
I well and truly believe that this is one of the best pieces I have read from you.
So full of emotion and truth in this poem. I really enjoyed reading it. It felt like you opened up to your readers more than ever and really told us how you were feeling. Exposing your emotions. I think it is wonderful.
I seem to have lost all of my possessions,
for I myself have become your possession.
Wow, so very powerful. The title really speaks in itself. It makes me think of peer pressure etc.