Help Me

by Innocent Fairy   Feb 14, 2012


Grant me common sense
when I can't think straight

Help me to follow my heart
when confusion blinds

Reasure me that I don't need a guy
Especially to be happy

Determination to bring my own life to rise
Determination to let the sun shine
even when the clouds try to bring me down

Help me make the right decisions
even when I try to find the wrong way
because my desires overpower and take control

Having feelings that run wild
really doesn't help at all
but help form who I am

Help me conquer that desires
are not the same as dreams,
there totally two different things

Help me grow stronger when I am weak
and to seek only what I need

Please bring joy to my soul
and let me bring joy to the world

When I know it's wrong
When I can't think straight
Grant me common sense
and help me follow my heart

Bring me closer to you
Help me do what's right and
reasure me that I don't need a guy
especially to be happy

And please help me
bring my own life to rise

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  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    This is beautiful. The simple choice of words made this more sincere and heart-felt. Well done!
    "Reasure me that I don't need a guy"
    Reassure
    "Help me conquer that desires
    are not the same as dreams,"
    ---I suggest you revise this to: "Help me conquer that my desires are not the same as dreams," but I think 'conquer' is chosen clumsily. It would be better is it was 'believe', just a suggestion, though.
    "there totally two different things"
    ---change 'there' to they're or they are
    Overall, a wonderful piece. Keep writing
    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    I think you have written a beautiful prayer, from your heart...something that should not go un-noticed by Him. But, as we ask his to be stronger, we have to also remember that God helps those who are willing to first help themselves. Those who at least make the effort...to be strong, to take the first steps themselves to step on the path to their own salvation. Those who rely on Him for everything are likely to be disappointed. To make the first attempts to dig out of your own "blues" or "follies" shows resolve, conviction and courage. So one should rely less on "others", significant or not, to pull us out of the hole we gug ourselves in, for that can only be detrimental in the long run...i.e. will create dependency on others in bad times. So, I think you have projected some touching thoughts very well, which many can relate to, but do not know where and whom to turn to. The most poignant lines to the reader are:

    "Reasure me that I don't need a guy
    Especially to be happy

    Determination to bring my own life to rise"

    Congratulations on the first step!

  • 11 years ago

    by Bobby

    It is beautiful the writing, the meaning and the way one can feel the emotion

  • 12 years ago

    by Renegade Angel

    I love the poem, because of the essence you show, as well as your soul is pouring out into the stanzas. this emotion is very heartfelt.

    if there is any help any of us can gove you, we'll be there. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    There is only one place for guidance and peace. You have penned that with perfection. Excellent