Spirit Of Soul (Loop)

by End Of Eternity   Feb 25, 2012

Surrounded by walls
Walls full of pride
Pride sometimes bleeds
Bleeds deep inside

Humming anthem
Anthem of greed
Greed eventually paints
Paints all good deeds

Spirit of soul died
Died behind reality
Reality lives forever
Forever breathe duality

** Loop Poetry is a poetry form created by Hellon. There are no restrictions on the number of stanzas nor on the syllable count for each line. In each stanza, the last word of the first line becomes the first word of line two, last word of line 2 becomes the first word of line 3, last word of line 3 becomes the first word of line 4. This is followed for each stanza. The rhyme scheme is abcb.


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  • 7 years ago

    by gumshuda

    I love this poem...
    It's beautiful.

  • 9 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet

    So a very touching poem...

    5/5 for you!

  • 9 years ago

    by KELLiE SHEA

    That was really cool!! I am new to loop poetry. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet


  • 10 years ago

    by Steven Beesley


    So nicely done, I have always wanted to try the loop form but have never got around to actually writing a poem in this form.

    After reading yours which was excellent, I will now need to sit down and have a go at writing one myself.

    Great work my friend!

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