Razor.....

by Rihanna   Apr 3, 2012


I'll paint you a picture
Picture with a twist

I'll paint it with
A razor blade

I'll paint it bright red
On my wrist

Now See the pain on
My wrist
This shows my broken feelings
Shattering on the floor..........

Drowning my sorrow
And trouble away
Hoping to see them
Despair one day......

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  • 11 years ago

    by Mello193

    Good imagery but i have heard the lines "let me paint a picture, a picture with a twist, let me paint a picture, a picture on my wrist" line before, but it was really sad. very emotional. i think you could expand on it a lot more to add some more depth to the piece. good write

    -193

  • 11 years ago

    by namless unactive account

    Feel like more could have been done with this one, loved what was done with it tho, and again i can relate.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jaida

    Its a good use of imagery i like it

  • 11 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    It can be reality, dont listen.

  • 11 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Awwww this is sad :( I hope everything is okay<3 beautiful piece I love it :) 5/5

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